Orginal sentence: One of the reasons we flirt in this way is that we can't help it. We're programmed to do it, whether by biology or culture.
1. A reason why we flirt the way we do is because it is biological embedded in us.
2. One reason that flirting is automatic for us is the fact that flirting is programmed into us by our culture.
3. People flirt the way they do because it is programmed in them and they can't control it because of biology or culture.
Thesis: Everybody flirts, whether they know it or not, with their gestures, talk, and eyes. It is natural for people to be physically attracted to each other.
Freewrite: I think this article is quite accurate. I feel that flirting is a way to meet people and talk to people. And because people flirt when they don't know it, it just proves that it is biologically normal for us to flirt and meet new people.
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