How did you become a writer/editor for the Lantern?
Monday, February 28, 2011
Interview Responses from Zack and Emilia
How did you become a writer/editor for the Lantern?
Wednesday, February 23, 2011
In-Class Public Writing/Blogger Workshop, Part 2
Stephanie Faddis - Group 5 - Individual Blog Post
Individual Post Group 5
Tuesday, February 22, 2011
Meet Meredith!- In-Class Public Writing/Blogger Workshop
Tips for Good Interviews
Meet The Editors of The Lantern- Public Writing/Blogger Workshop
Meet Devin! Public Writing/Blogger Workshop
Meet Rachel!- Public Writing/Blogger Workshop
Meet Katie!- Public Writing/Blog Workshop
Post 5:
Meet Emilia!- Public Writing/ Blogger Workshop
ABOUT EMILIA BENTON
Check out Emilia's biography on her running blog, Run for Your Life!
Read the following posts, and consider the following questions. How does Emilia construct her ethos differently in these posts? What kind of expertise does she draw on for each, and how does she communicate this? How might you compare and contrast the rhetorical goals of these articles? What do you think the main challenges of running a personal blog might be, compared to those involved with working for a publication? Why?
Post 1: http://www.caffeinatedrunner.com/2011/02/look-at-my-winter-morning-running.html
Post 2: http://www.caffeinatedrunner.com/2011/01/six-snowy-miles-through-astoria-and-i.html
Post 3: http://www.caffeinatedrunner.com/2011/01/on-running-like-girl-or-getting-chicked.html
Post 4: http://www.caffeinatedrunner.com/2010/11/nyc-marathon-recap.html
Post 5: http://journals.lww.com/nephrologytimes/Fulltext/2010/12000/Presumed_Consent__More_Deceased_Donor_Kidney.6.aspx
Meet Shelley!- Public Writing/Blogger Workshop
Group 5 Individual Post
I think that the creators of this ad, Pepsi, have the goal of making the audience laugh while at the same time trying to sell their product. Because of the over the top actions and expressions of the man and woman in the commercial, it is expected that the company is making fun of typical gender stereotypes in relationships, and while doing this plays on how familiar television watchers are with these stereotypes to promote Pepsi Max. Not much of an ethos is portrayed in this commercial but by watching this advertisement, one can assume that the writers are knowledgeable of how our society views men and women and their takes on relationships. In this way, the Pepsi company is up to date on how feminine and masculine perspectives on love are portrayed in the media, if nothing else. Judging by the comments left on the youtube video of the advertisement, this mockery of stereotypes backfired and some of the audience found the ad to be offensive against both their gender and their religion. The authors do an interesting job of selling their product because they know what the American public desires, at least on their television sets: sex. By making Pepsi Max more appealing than sex to the man in the ad, they have made the impression that their product is even better than what is on the minds of all men. No particularly scholarly knowledge is portrayed in the ad, but Pepsi advertisers do seem to have knowledge of what appeals to their key audience.
Group 5 Individual Post
The Pepsi Max advertisement is more directed to men. It was aired during the Superbowl, and since this is a sporting event it is thought to have more male viewers than female viewers. However it does incorporate women through the humor of the first date situation. It mocks both the stereotypical ideal of how men and women act on their first dates and what they are thinking about. It shows men as caring more about sexual desires than a life long partner, while women are thinking more about a long term relationship then just the night. This shows a mocking ideal of how relationships or first dates are set out. This commercial is supposed to be humorous and not taken seriously, so I think the writer is hoping that their audience has a good sense of humor. Also, I think that this commercial is hoping the audience values the type of beverage they drink. The creators of this advertisement attempt to display how good of a drink Pepsi Max is through the man’s thoughts in this commercial. By putting Pepsi Max above sex in this man's head is somewhat of a big deal. The stereotypical ideal for a man is to put sex above anything else, so for a man to change his original thoughts to the Pepsi Max beverage means it must be a very good drink. I think that this advertisement creates a set target audience effectively and creates a commercial that is relatable in a funny, mocking sort of way.
Group 5 Blog Project
Wednesday, February 9, 2011
Group 3 Individual Post
The comments on the video seem mostly male oriented. They tend to favor the idea and joke about how beer has been helping UGLY people get laid since 1845, and how the man in the video needs more beer than that. A woman commented on the video and asked "how much beer does a girl need to drink to find him attractive?" I find this interesting because how often do you hear a girl say that? Women are hardly ever heard commenting on the amount of drinks they must consume to find someone attractive. I think there are different reasons why each gender drinks and goes out. Although there are exceptions to every argument, men tend to be more sexual beings. They’ve had a successful night if they found a girl to bring home with them. In response to the comment about how beer has helped ugly people get laid, I think that’s the individuals personal opinion and it doesn’t mean it’s correct. Every person has a different idea of beauty. Somebody might not be the most attractive, but that doesn’t mean they are ugly. Beauty can be defined by their personality, behaviors, thoughts, feelings, way of life, ambitions, etc. Beauty is not something that can be defined just by appearance. Men make women out to be these objects that always have to look their best, while the man can be un-showered, unshaven and in sweats and that’s supposed to be acceptable. It is unfair to put the opposite gender on a higher pedestal then the one you’ve put your own gender on. If you have to rely on drinking to find a person attractive, then you shouldn’t be with the person.
Group 4 Individual Post.
Question 1.
The Go daddy as that we used as our source was originally on television, but we used Youtube as our source. Because YouTube is a very common website that displays thousands of videos I couldn't really use it to analyze our sources website interface. Our video was an ad for GoDaddy.com though, so I went to this website to get the details.
At the end of the ad we watched it said that the website content for GoDaddy.com was “unrated”, so I was unsure of what to expect. To my surprise the website homepage was actually very professional and well done. Of course their Go Daddy girl Danica Patrick was on the homepage welcoming you. The content of the commercials always seem so risque because of the sexual content, but the website was rather clean cut. Go Daddy may use attractive young women to get you to their site but in all reality the site does what it is suppose to do. Across the home page all of their deals for domain names and websites are popping out at you. Go daddy realizes that they use some pretty ridiculous ads to get you to their site, so once your there they want you to be able to trust them and be confident in using their site. Besides the deals there are privacy guarantees and authority certifications stretching across the bottom of the screen. Below this there is a description of each of their services to further comfort you and entice you into using their site over others.
At first glance at Go Daddy's theme of sexual content you might feel the website is unprofessional. But the more you actually look into their products and services you come to realize that their values definitely include customer satisfaction. They want you to be able to trust them and feel confident that you will get exactly what you want from them. Go Daddy is not what it appears to be when judging them from the ad we picked out.
Tuesday, February 8, 2011
Group-4 individual post
Question3
After watching this “Go Daddy” commercial, I think it is highly possible that the author is heterosexual and male. He made the two go-daddy girls half naked and each girl wear the special costumer with “Go” and “daddy” to appeal the male viewers because he knows what male want about female and what can draw male’s attention. The author utilized a lot of sexual suggestive words like “racy”, “strippers”, “shower with a girl”, “unrated”, and the “double d”, which is not only the letter in “daddy” but also the size of bust. The only thing he tried to do is to repeat so as to emphasize the brand of product or here we can say the name of Go-daddy website. Can you figure what the go-daddy website exactly is and any traits or functions of the go-daddy website if you had never heard the go-daddy before? The answer is no for most of people because the commercial doesn’t tell anything other than the name about the website. So I believe the author is a veteran in advertising and somehow an extremist in job. He should have abundant experience in advertising and dare to break new paths. Because the author gave up explaining the product but concentrated on impressing viewers with the name of product so as to gain the reputation for it. According to the effects of the go-daddy commercial, it is likely that we can make the announcement that sex is one of the most attractive elements in pop culture, which is also the most frequently appeared component in commercial. Because the concept of gender is easy to appeal to people and cause controversy, which are aims of the advertising. Even though sex component would gain the negative responding, sponsors are still welling to do.
Individual post Blog group4 : "Go daddy.com" ad
I think that the writer of the ad targets the male audience, who usually connect the Internet. The ad is attempting to promote the product, “go daddy.com.” Even though the ad does not provide detailed information about the website, the audience can easily recognize that the website deals with the Internet domain.
Individual Blog 4 Post: "Go Daddy Ad: The Contract"
Response to question 5: Does this ad do anything or convince the viewer?
I think the commercial is actually pretty persuasive, persuasive to the wrong crowd for the website, maybe. But, I do remember their name after watching the commercial. Not only do they use sex appeal to appeal to the male viewers, they also use name recognition and repetition to have every viewer remember their brand.
The commercial starts out with two skinny, tall, teased hair, Caucasian, women with long legs and little clothing. This automatically catches the attention of half the population of television watchers, men. These two models are not only “beautiful” they also refer to already performing sexually explicit material including strippers and showering with other women and that the commercial the viewer was about to watch was “crossing the line”. This gets the viewers attention right away, these women are about to do something more than shower with each other! The viewer watches while the models strut onto the set and everyone stares. The models are then shown with only the “Go Daddy” logo on their bodies dancing on a bright orange set. When first watching this ad, I had assumed the commercial was for some sort of website with pornography or sexually explicit material as it suggests. But, they clearly used the idea that sex sells.
The words “Go Daddy”, the name of the website, are repeated or seen on the screen around 13 times. This is a lot considering the commercial is only around a minute and a half. The constant repetition of the name of the site and the visuals of the website itself and the logo keeps the name in your head after finishing the commercial.
With the sex appeal effect and the name repetition, I believe the makers of the commercial will get a good amount of people to go to the website, most likely men, which is ultimately the goal of the commercial. However, since the commercial didn’t once talk about, only wrote in a short sentence, what the websites content was, I doubt many people will stay on or frequently use the website because of this advertisement.